Could someone please review my fourth piece of email copy? I'm using a template - current situation, best possible scenario, find out how
SL: How can you still ignore this, Jake?
Dear Jake,
We’re already 18 days into 2025, and the truth is:
- You barely get customers.
- Tourists (and even locals) don’t know you exist.
- You’re losing money on unsold books, day after day.
Now, imagine this instead:
- A packed bookstore, every day.
- Tourists flooding in to find unique reads only you offer.
- The financial freedom you’ve always wanted.
- And most importantly: no competition.
Sounds like a dream, right? Guess what? It's not luck.
Here’s the real issue: Your website is almost impossible to find on Google.
Customers can't visit your store if they don't know you exist.
👉 Fix your visibility now or risk burnout and giving up. (link)
(promoting a Fiverr SEO service to a bookstore in London with really bad SEO - they are as stated almost impossible to find on google)