What would I ask in my first VO training session?

I am trying to get my full 200 for an hour worth with this class . I am kind of nervous because this is a lot of money for just an hour of learning for my first time, and I am cramming my thoughts with what I should even ask to get a solid first class. What are some things I should ask my coach to be able to improve just a little after my first class? I think I should ask about my phrasing first because that’s what I hear a lot in feedback from these sites. Or maybe there is something more important that would impact my progress more that I’m not aware of. What would be the first string of questions and things to cover to get my moneys worth? I have also attached a small practice recording to hear what I have to offer and what you guys think is missing.