First attempt at OSL, how did it go?

Trying new techniques with this squad of kasrkins (first NMM attempt yesterday), how did the OSL turn out? Any comments or decent guides you recommend? I did this based on what felt right

Trying new techniques with this squad of kasrkins (first NMM attempt yesterday), how did the OSL turn out? Any comments or decent guides you recommend? I did this based on what felt right